Yes, it is true. Long awaited, never-before seen pencils of pages. (Of pandas painting pictures of penguins?) NO! Of Paohlo, the poor little Euro-trash boy who is about to meet the love of his life! And now, the PAGES!
"Futbol: A Love Story" is set in the Alpine town of Sophia Alm in
post WWII. The town draws heavily from my own travels
to a small Austrian town called Maria Alm.
Big creative name change, I know.
Paohlo in Signor Van der Spiegel's storeThe dialog is poorly scribbled in there, sorry.
And this one has no dialog whatsoever. I write the dialogin my head as I draw and rarely write it down, a process I do
not recommend as for obvious reasons as it is so hard to
remember what is said if a hiatus is taken. . .
And so, one day, this story will be completed. Inked, colored, lettered, the whole nine. Today is not that day. Critiques are welcome, goodness knows I need some and don't give me any wisecracks on the importance of writing down dialog, I know. I just don't.
sweet!
ReplyDeleteand everybody's process is different. i randomly scribble dialogue during my thumbnails and promptly forget them when it's time to finish it. but i feel like that's something that should be more fluid and not set in stone until you're almost done.
as for a crit. maybe play with you camera angles more. right now everything is kinda mid shots. but then again the mid-shots create a nice rhythm...........
Wow! You’ve been busy and they’re looking nice. I like that interior of the local store. I totally failed on my first update. I'm going to try again next Tuesday. Glad you’re back on the scene!!!
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